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dear death
i feel you there again
slithering
creeping up
yet, i turn
you're not there
this time
you're teasing me
dear death
i wish that you would stop
i can't stand this
triphammering in my chest
you're so close
i can smell you
like a rancid corpse
in a dank basement
that it's parents aren't even aware of
i can almost touch you
but i can't reach back
not far enough
take me home
dear death
i think i'll go back home
'go back home'
i hope i've left too long
'you've been gone too long'
dear death
please be waiting there
let me trip as i climb the stairs
let be slip as i slice my carrots
take me down
into the depths
or please
dear death
just take me
stop with the teasing
it's worse than holding you here
dear death
i think i want to fall
'you've stood too long'
i think i'm tired of it all
'just lay back down'
:iconunshattered:
The third and prolly final title in my "dear you" series that none of you never even knew existed.
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:iconbrebear:
i likeies it... good job :D
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:iconunshattered:
thenekers
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:iconnolight:
"let be slip as i slice my carrots" lol. i love that.
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:iconunshattered:
yeah
I liked it toom twas fun
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:icondeadambition:
o woah thts awesome good job!
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~snazy-a-tastic Jul 22, 2004   Photographer
Oooh, I love it!
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:iconkarlthehippy:
See!
That's the writing I missed!
Your last two definitely have the old flavor to them.
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:iconunshattered:
yay!
I didn't like this one nearly as much as the first 2
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